Plot Device wrote:cob wrote:Are you writing for cavers? If so you won't make very much money (*not enuf of us) and if you are writing for the general public... THEY WON'T KNOW! or care or that matter. A good story will carry itself. I wouldn't sweat it.
Well, I'm trying to write something that won't trigger too many eye-rolls from those members of the audience who could possibly know a thing or two about indigenous rock strata in the New England area. And I suspect that not just cavers would know: geologists, archeologists, miners, contruction professionals--all of them would know these things.
When you write a glaring error in a story, it distracts the reader from your novel, or else distract the audience member from your film. That one little rolling of the eyes
takes their gaze and their concentration off the page/screen and away from your tale. And when concenetration is broken, so is the ability to suspend disbelief.
A good story covers all its bases. So I want to cover mine. 8)
PD hit the nail square on.
As an author, you need to be an expert in whatever you're writing about because someone who IS an expert is that field is liable to read that book. And its not just coincidence, either. People like to read about things that they are interested in.
I've been told point blank by people reading things I've written that something wouldn't happen that way. And not just major plot stuff. Little things that you consider 'filler', someone else will jump on. Someone once pointed out that the firearm an Air Force captain was using was not 'standard issue' and that it would be VERY unlikely that he would get training in it. He suggested that I either come up with a believable back story for it or change the weapon.
I'm writing a story now - literally a cave man story (cro-magnons and neanderthals). One of the things I'm trying to keep as accurate as possible is the stone age tech that each group was likely to use. (it's actually very integral to the story). So I wind up reading a lot of archaeology journals.
One of the examples I like to use concerns Paul Steward's last book (whcih I edited for historical accuracy). in one story he mentions muslim temples in the middle east. Only problem is that the story takes place around the birth of christ - 700+ years BEFORE Islam was founded! It's a simple mistake. His source said persian. Persian = islam (i know.. that's a mistake as well, I'm not getting into that here). It was one word removed, but somebody would have noticed it.
And there's been some humorous cave fiction out there (unintentional, of course.) Anne McLean Matthews' "The Cave" has a mega-system under a house in New Hampshire. teh cave scenes are actaully pretty good - but there isn't any Ls anywhere near the site! The same goes for a book which takes place in Trenton NJ. apparantly, NJ has a 50+ mile cave!
The point is, if the reader recognizes one major gaffe, he's going to suspect others and look down on your book. And he's probably right.
Getting back to PD's story...
PD, I would recommend, in addition to setting your cave in a good spot to actually visit a cave, preferrably in the company of cavers. What i mean is take a wild tour (and cavers are the cheapest way of doing it). If at all possible, take two or three. Writing good cave literature takes work, and is kind of specialized. If you can pull it off (and I can't see why you wouldn't) you can give your audience a great ride. If you live near WV, let me know and I'll be glad to take you somewhere.
Also, do a search on shalon's name on this board. he came with similar questions. check out my thought son writing for the underground there as well.
Go to your library and read (at least) The Longest Cave, by Brucker and Watson. Read other cave books if they have them, but that's pretty much required. They do an excellent job of making you feel like you're in there.
That should keep you busy through the thanksgiving weekend. ;)
john