Anonymous_Coward wrote:I like the motto, but I'm not sure yet if it is saying what you want it to. I like it because it sounds obscure and thought-provoking.
From my perspective, it sounds like you are saying that there is some disagreement between us. Because of that, the two of us are unable to effectively interact with caves in a meaningful way. This causes caves to become distant, existing independent of us instead of being an integral part of us. This feeling of separation between the two of us and caves will go away once you and I can come to an agreement.
Is that even close to what you had in mind?
Give us an example of the feeling that you are trying to convey, or the situation that you are trying to describe, and then we can help with the English.
Thanks for reply, I knew there's something I was missing
The motto is in fact thought-provoking and obscure and one may find different meanings.
The idea is following: Caves exist independently of us (human beeings) until we (me, you, anyone) agree with this statement (that caves exist independently of us). When we no longer think that caves exist independently of us, then we will be able to interact with them, create them in our minds and in reality, influence them.
Try putting word '
gravity' instead of 'caves'.
Gravity exist independently of us until we agree with that.
Gravity exists whether or not we know about its existence, whether or not we want it in our lives. When we start questioning such statement then we can start alternating gravity, play with it, use it for our needs.
Hope I made it a bit more clear.